Monday, June 18, 2012

The Adventures on Kah: Finding Vohx

Present Day

As Valorj and his wife looked out of the ship window, they looked upon valleys and mountains filled with plants we had never seen or even heard of. The grass wasn't green. It was as white as snow, and what looked to be a body of water was a deep purple. The clouds were a pale yellow on an even lighter yellow sky. Mist that filled the space above the mountains took on a light azure color. In the deepest valley we saw a small village that looked primitively made. The woman instantly wanted to run out of the ship and explore. But she was smart enough to know that this planet might not have an atmosphere. So, she sent Valorj out there in his space suit to check out the area.

As he reached the door of the ship, he sighed a deep sigh and rolled his eyes, wondering why he kept doing these things for her. He closed the air lock and opened the ship's door. 

One step. 
Two steps.
Three.

He kept walking until he was at the edge of a cliff, but still able to see Leslie through the rocket's main windows. It was a gorgeous sight. Just below the cliff was a large lake filled with the deep purple water.

He noticed that the town wasn't that far away; maybe a mile at the most. Valorj beckoned for Leslie to join him at the edge.
After what seemed like an hour of waiting, he saw her walking toward him. He waved and she waved back, and she noticed him smile a slight smile through his high-tech helmet.

She started jogging as much as she could toward him, when suddenly, from overhead, something hit Valorj in the face, cracking the thick glass. He stopped smiling as another something hit him in the chest. Leslie stopped moving and stared at him, watching him fall backward over the cliff as a large net caught her from behind.

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